Thursday, 17 May 2012

The Anxious Journey 1

The Anxious Journey 1 from Charlotte Buchan on Vimeo.

Rendered version of 'The Anxious Journey'. However need to re render it as when put into my pre-vis the clip is a little bit too short. However the more I get these renders out the more I look forward to putting it together.

1 comment:

  1. okay - some steam feedback; it looks too much like fire for a number of reasons... the speed of the steam is suggestive of flames; the shape of the steam tapers into a hard point, which again reinforces the idea that we're looking at a flare; if it was steam, the shape would widen and dissipate into the air, so it would lose definition as it went higher; finally, the yellow colour cast adds to the impression of fire. Personally, I think the steam could be much slower and more dreamy in terms of its behaviour, and it should certainly fade, as opposed to sharpen to a point.